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How to peel the skin from the banana  

2008-09-28 10:35:16|  分类: 默认分类 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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      Yesterday ,   I went to the primary school to meet my cute son.  When he was at the sight of me , he cried on hugry.   I  gave the banana to him ,  maybe  he was really hungry,   so he hurried to peel the skin of the banana whatever the ends.  I mentioned him how to do that  and suggested  that he should peel the skin form this end, however he had already peeled form that end.

      Now ,  I  think carefully  what I said.  In fact,  how to peel the skin of the banana  was a  insignificant things.  it was not necessary for me to teach my naughty  son  how to do.

     If  I  had died one day ,  my son would  learn  how to deal with all kinds of  difficult things   he have met.  he have to to be independent  by  himself.

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Yesterday ,   I went to the primary school to meet my cute son.  When he  caught  sight of me , he cried  because he was hugry.   I  gave  a  banana to him ,  maybe  he was really hungry,   so he hurried to peel the skin of the banana  from the wrong  end.  I mentioned  to  him how to do that  and suggested  that he should peel the skin form this end, however he had already peeled form that end.

      Now ,  I  am  thinking  carefully  about  what I said.  In fact,  how to peel  a  banana  skin  is   an  insignificant thing.  it  is  not necessary for me to teach my naughty  son  how to do  it .

     If  I   die   one day ,  my son will  learn  how to deal with all kinds of  difficult things   he  meets .  he has  to to be independent  by  himself. 2008-10-12

 

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